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The Writing Conference
Murray's signature pedagogical innovation: the one-on-one conversation between teacher and student about a draft in progress — not a lecture, not a correction session, but a conversation in which the teacher responds to what the writing is actually doing.
The writing conference sounds simple and is not. It required Murray to do what most teachers are trained not to do: shut up, listen, and respond to what the student's writing is actually doing rather than what the teacher thinks it should be doing. The teacher reads the draft. The teacher points to the one sentence with life in it — the sentence where the student's voice breaks through the performance of 'school writing.' The teacher says: 'This. Write more of this.' The student goes away and revises, retaining authorial control, deciding which observations to act on and which to set aside. The conference works because of a specific distribution of cognitive labor: the student does the writing; the teacher does the responding; neither function replaces the other.
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The conference depends on a form of attention that Murray called 'response' rather than 'feedback.' Response is